Thursday 18th March 2004

John, Jordan and Chris are having an argument about a bike.

John: (Shouting at Jordan) It’s my turn to ride the bike.

Chris: Let me have a go you stupid boy Jordan.

(Chris and Jordan have a fight and John gets the bike and rides off)

John: (in a funny way) bye ha ha.

Jordan: (grinding his teeth) get him.

Chris (running to Jordan) I’m not finished Jordan.

(Chris tries to throw a stone at Jordan. It did not get Jordan it hit a car window)

Jordan: (shouting) come on run.

Chris: I’m coming, he’s coming out.

(The man came out of his home)

Man: (running down the road and shouting) come back, I will phone the police.

(The man goes back in the house and does call the police)

Jordan: (shouting to Chris) I’m going in for my tea.

Chris: (shouting) Me to.

Man: (nervously) 999 can I have the police my cars been smashed.

(Policeman on the phone)

Policeman: Yes.

(John comes back with the bike and the police car turns up and the man comes out)

Man: (pointing at John) here he is.

Policeman: (Walking closer to John) were take him away.

(The police car door opens. Chris and Jordan looking at John)

John: It was not me.

Policeman: Get in.

And here is the response I got from my teacher: